So, I wrote something for Comm Arts.
It's not even in the same galaxy as what I usually write.
I'm looking for
A) Typos.
B) If I should trash it or not. I'm not going to change much, maybe a few places where it be smoother, but honestly I just don't want to.
EDIT: Might help if I remember to copy and paste it in here.
EDIT 2: CUTS ARE A GOOD THING.
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